School Lunch Found Guilty!


School Lunch V.s Brought in Lunch by ayshat
May 6, 2010, 2:24 pm
Filed under: Uncategorized

 

Guilty

 Which Food Would You Choose ?

I Think The School Lunch Will Lose

Thats Not Big News !

Every Ones gonna get Flus

They Might Even Get a Bruise

With All These Messed Up Foods

After eating Everyone Has bad Moods

The Pasta an beans has many issues

Is this Food? Because im confused!

Everyone Argues

Fix This Because it’s really Bad News

Come try  both lucnches and choose

But i Know That The School Lunch is Guilty and Will lose

                                                                              –Aysha & Khadija

 

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I love your poem! It is such an awesome way,to show that the lunch for that day was GUILTY! I also like the part where you said “THE SCHOOL LUNCH WOULD LOSE” because I’m pretty sure it would! Also, I like the way the poem is set up,where there’s only a seperate line in the poem! I never saw a poem as a post before,but you guys did an awesome job and really went overboard, with it! The poem shows really how terrible the lunch was! Great Job, you guys! 🙂

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